Nahhhh
Sprites arent yours, lets face it. Maybe you modded them, but still it's copyrighted material, aside from that the story was kinda corny, and the voice acting was sub par. I liked the bit with the engineer going "mornin'" only to be shot. I can see you worked hard on it though so high score :D
Anything with effort deserves 7/10.
Good luck with any future movies you make